Magic is always cool.
1.) After having my story work shopped I feel as though it has potential to be very entertaining. Many comments were very positive, and so my confidence with it has grown. 2.) Clarity is the area where I will try to focus on. I have a few characters in my story and comments talked about some slight confusion as to whom was speaking. 3.) Some of the things that went well in the first workshop was the believability of my short story. My characters appeared as though they were actual people. Also the plot worked well because all the comments praised it for its originality. In workshop #2, I want to see better descriptions, and 4.) Claudia Delvillar, Natasha Garcia and Jeremiah Then, were the most helpful. Author Role-Play a.) My author Carlos Fuentes, was born in Panama City, Panama, on Novemebr 11th, 1928. He moved around a lot because of his fathers job, which meant he grew up in many different Latin America sea. c.) Fuentes became interested in writing after his ...